AS3 - Task Six - Finished product

I have created an advert for the Phone Sony Xperia Z3 by the company Sony. I chose this phone because when my friend got it for the first time she went around showing it to us and telling us about how amazing it was and also showing us that it is water proof. The age range for my advert is for 16 and over. This is because the phone has a lot of things about it that people like such as it being water proof because teenagers tend to take their phone everywhere, even places where there is water and the camera on the phone is actually really good to take pictures and film with when you are out and about with your family or friends. The selling point of this product is the wider screen because it makes it easier to read texts and emails from.

One I had got all the filming and the editing done for my advert, I then went on to getting the feedback on the advert. I got mixed feedback on my advert on what i did good and what I could have done better.  The questions that I asked during getting the feed back is what they liked the advert? what they did not like about their advert? what I could have done better with my advert? I asked these questions because that way I know what I can do better next time if i make a new advert at any point. What people said about my advert was that it did look rushed (which I can agree with) but what they did like was how the scenes at the begging go together well because the first scene blends into the second one really well.

What I think I did well with the advert is the way that i filmed the advert. I think that I got good shots in the advert such as close ups and personal point of view shots. What I could have improved on in this advert is that i could have focused more on the phone and had the actress could have spoke more about the phones good points and not just three things about the phone. I do agree with the feedback that was given to me for the advert.

I think that the advert did have steady frames, smooth camera movements and I think that the shots were steady. I do think that the advert makes it clear what the product is I think that this advert did sell the product because people will like the idea of the wider screen and faster internet. I think it was a good idea because it shows people how clear the screen is and the fast internet.

What I could have improved with the advert is that I could have spent more time on filming and got more shot so I could choose the best shots and put them into the advert and maybe I could have put more camera shot in the advert

I think I did achieve my aim with the advert but I do believe that I could have done better with the whole making on the actual advert.